PookyTheMagicalBear's Mini Normal Review, April 2022

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One Neighborhood of [4] Players

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Primary: mastina
Secondary: Ircher

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hello I just noticed this review fizzled out - there's another one that's passed review that I can put into signups, but this will be up next as soon as it's passed.

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Town Crier isn't normal.

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Day roles also aren't a normal modifier.

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This is a valid normal role.

(That said, and this is true of the original role too - I'm not sure why it's a miller, given that Ascetic Miller Even Night Mailman and Ascetic Even Night Mailman are equivalent roles in essentially 100% of circumstances as far as I can tell, except for the role name the player is given or something like an informed role that's told there's a miller)

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Probably a good idea to start writing up role PMs and your rules post, as those are also typically encompassed in the review.

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One more small suggestion - town roles should be more "obviously" town. E.g. neighbor should be "town neighbor". Assuming you're also including the

tags themselves in the role PMs, that should be good enough.

Rule post is also a good thing to write out beforehand, typically reviewers will skim it or just double check for the important bits like existence of a VT sample PM and explicit mention of daytalk/multitasking.

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(Or some reviewers will review it thoroughly)

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And this is at last entering signups.